Random thoughts about Flowers
for Algernon (the short story)
Warning: This article contains
spoilers. Proceed with care.
Flowers for Algernon follows Charlie Gordon through a psychological
experiment. He keeps progress reports, so that the scientists studying him, and
others reading the reports later, can understand the exact mental changes he
experiences. The story is constructed from Charlie’s reports. Charlie begins
his course with the significantly below average IQ of 68, and he can barely
comprehend conversations happening around him. But Charlie then receives the experimental
operation, and his mental capacity soars. The fog clears, and the reader can
observe Charlie’s rapidly evolving perception of the world. But all is not
well. Just as Charlie hits his stride, so to speak, Algernon, a mouse who
received the same surgery as Charlie, begins to regress. He becomes short-tempered
and stubborn. When Algernon finally passes away, Charlie is certain that his
fate will not be much different. When he notices his mind failing, Charlie runs
away from New York to live out his days where no one will remember who he was
or what he accomplished.
Random Thought 1: Even though Charlie himself will not
know it, he has helped a lot of people on their quest of life.
Although Charlie’s research is briefly mentioned in the
text, and he alludes to ideas he developed in a letter to one of the scientists
working on him, the reader doesn’t really know what exactly Charlie has discovered.
By the end of the story, Charlie himself no longer understands or remembers the
advancements he has helped to make. But he was working to perhaps help people born
with disabilities like his own. I am fairly sure that Charlie’s work will, in
the future, let people become smart.
I also think that Charlie changed some minds at the
factory he was working at before the experiment. At first, they were cruel to
Charlie, mocking him for his ignorance and then forcing him out once he started
learning. I think they were scared of him, because they were terrified that he’d
realize how they’d mocked him and set out to seek revenge. They were also probably
resentful after Charlie rearranged the machines for the manager at the factory,
saving him thousands of dollars a year in labor. That would have lost some jobs.
But then Charlie had to return to work there as his mind failed, and there was
nowhere else for him to go. And the workers gladly welcomed Charlie back. His
old secret tormentors even stepped up to defend Charlie when a newer employee poked
fun at him for his mental decline. I’m not sure what the change is in these
men, but their attitudes towards Charlie certainly have changed. Perhaps they
have more respect for him due to his accomplishments. Perhaps they’re anxious
to make amends to avoid facing his wrath. Or maybe they’ve learned to just
inherently treat people with respect, if only because they may become super intelligent
and powerful someday and threaten your livelihood.
Random Thought 2: Is intelligence as awesome as humans
say?
Well, it must be great, because humans tend to strive
for it. We want to be smart and understand the world around us. And the thought
of losing that ability—to age, to illness, to injury, is very daunting.
Awareness is a consuming reality, and humans, who have it, swear they are much
better off in knowing than not, while other species, with a lower degree
of awareness, will never recognize the difference, and get along just fine. On
the other hand, perhaps we humans are on to something. We are a very successful
species, after all. But our population isn’t close to that of, say,
However, it cannot be ignored that being acutely aware
of one’s surroundings and interactions can lead to more hardship than complete
ignorance. I suppose that’s why early childhood is always associated with
bubbling energy: the child does not understand large problems, and so they can’t
worry about them. The extent of their world is their backyard.
Charlie doesn’t recognize the cruelty of his friends
until his brain is modified, and then he feels shame for himself. Shame for not
recognize he was going along with being the butt of every joke. And then, he
was terrified when his brain began to decline. Though the knowledge had brought
him pain, the idea of losing it frightened him even more.
So, I suppose it’s something that humans are wired to
pursue. We want to be smart, and we like to know things. On top of that,
knowing things bolsters our credit with other humans, which is great because
don’t most humans just want to be respected?
Random Thought 3: Flowers for Algernon serves
as a parallel to aging.
One of the first connections I made when reading this
story was to the very basic human experience of growing old. Charlie begins
with a very limited understanding of the world. He trusts what people tell him,
and he believes that no one intends him harm. Therefore, I immediately assumed
him to be a young child. In fact, if Keyes hadn’t stated in Charlie’s first
progress report that Charlie is 37, I would have assumed he was eight or so. Charlie’s
perception of the world has a rosy glow to it: everything is simple. For
example, he desperately wishes to be smart and believes that the experiment can
make him that way. He sees his coworkers as friends, even as they parade him around
for entertainment. He watches his night school teacher, Miss Kinnian, with
respect and adoration for her endless genius.
After the operation, Charlie begins to age. He enters
his “teenage” years quickly, becoming doubtful of the processes that the scientists
are asking him to complete: Rorschach tests (those ink blot things where you
describe images the ink looks like) and progress reports. He becomes more aware
of the ideas of deception and mockery and realizes the world isn’t all
sunshine and rainbows. For example, when he is asked (for the second time) to do
a Rorschach test, Charlie is confused because he recognizes he is supposed to
interpret the ink as an image, and not to find actual images hidden in the ink.
He wonders if maybe the test proctor intentionally misled him. Further, Charlie
realizes that his “friends” at the factory were never really being friendly
with him. They just paraded him around for laughs. As is necessary to growing
up, Charlie recognizes unpleasantries within the world and grows bitter at
them, and towards himself for not seeing them sooner.
Charlie’s adulthood is demonstrated when he develops a
very specific plan of how he will contribute to the world. After he notices a dishwasher
at a restaurant being ridiculed for his lack of understanding, Charlie abruptly
remembers his own past ignorance and his past self, which he has tried to this
point to place outside of his mind. He leaps to the boy’s defense, and then he scolds
himself for laughing, and for almost forgetting where he had started. He vows to
add whatever he can to the research done on him, to maybe help others like him
attain knowledge.
And then, Charlie is struck abruptly with “old age.” His
mind deteriorates as he struggles to maintain all the knowledge he has built up
over the course of the experiment, and to maintain his progress in the world. Of
course, he cannot maintain his memories and the new skills he has learned. All
he can do is sit back and witness his fall. Finally, Charlie must accept that
his new life will not stick, and that his “improved” self will be gone. He explains
in his progress report that he will leave New York, leave everyone he knows, so
that he will not end up being ridiculed for all that he has lost.
I’d recommend you read the story. I liked it, and
found it provoked a handful of random thoughts. In my opinion, random thoughts
are good, especially when I can connect them to other things. So yeah, read the
book.
-Fallon M
Great post. Flowers for Algernon is easily one of my favorite books of all time, and it sparks several random thoughts for me as well, although I have to say yours are really good as well.
ReplyDeleteThis book sounds really interesting. The concept of an experiment being done on someone to make them smarter is something I haven't heard of before. Your thoughts about the book are really interesting and made me think a lot about knowledge and what it means. As people with knowledge, we value knowledge very highly but I think it is hard to say how important it really is since we are biased through having it. Great job!
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